What do you think of this eulogy I wrote for my grandma?

That was so touching. Your love and compassion for your grandma is Very evident. I believe that in today's world with all the broken family's/homes, a connection like yours with your grandma is hard to find. I am a 50 year old grandma with a beautiful 5 year old granddaughter. She comes to our home for the weekend once a month. I get down on the floor with her and we play dolls and we color and we just have fun. Anyway your eulogy is beautiful. May your grandmas lite shine forever in your heart.